Photos from my first project. Hoping to get better because I'm not liking these. It feels really generic and I need to get a knack for finding creativity in the environment. Here they are for your viewing nontheless.
Saturday, February 3, 2007
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Not bad. A few may make it in a brochure though. I don't mean to be critical but I'd like to make a few suggestions.
1) It's too bad you couldn't stand on higher ground to create the illusion that the sun is the midpoint where everything emerges from and the landscape gets bigger. Kinda like the image of railroad tracks dimishing into a small tunnel.
2)This looks cool. It's like a path to nowhere. It would be cooler if your camera was on top of a tech deck on the middle rail making it look bigger to appear like you are skating down the rail. Just a thought.
3) I've seen this in the undergrad catalog somewhere. The concept is interesting however. I'd like to place a black blob in the middle like it was part of horror movie scene.
4) Footprints are good. A track of footprints stopped in the middle of the street are better, especially with a lifeless body. How morbid.
5) Nice play with shadows.
6) THIS is original. I dub this the Before and After. The small little divider messes up similarities of both halves but you can edit that.
7) I don't like the van there. The building is cut off. Hey you can also do the new dorms or University Square where the Subway is under construction.
Anyway don't take offense. If I was your professor I'd say you've captured every day structures and added the vivrance of nature. For that you shall be commended for your effort and willingness to create something almost extraordinary. Good job. You have an eye for simpleness and beauty.
(loveyou)I mean... no.
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